Esraa Alhowary
There are a lot of good things happened with me today fortunately. 😂 And I had been waiting for good things to happen for a long time. In the last few months just bad things happened with me 😕 I don't even have any good things to remember in the last few months. Today, my sister gave a birth to her daughter and it's a very special day because I became an aunt finally and I'm very glad about that😊. So l went to the hospital to help my sister taking care of her daughter. And I took an assortment of sweet to celebrate the birth of my neice.
Oct 27, 2020 4:15 AM
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There are many good things which happened to me today, fortunately. 😂 I had been waiting for good things to happen for a long time. In the last few months just bad things happened to me 😕 I don't even have any good events to remember in the last few months. Today my sister gave a birth to her daughter, and it's a very special day because I finally became an aunt. I'm very happy about that😊. So, l went to the hospital to help my sister with taking care of her daughter. I brought an assortment of sweets to celebrate my niece' birthday.
A real story :) ? Congrats!!! Back on a comma vs no comma after "sentence starters" :)... I think of it this way... If in my native language I need to take a breath between such a starter (think of counting, for example..."first, I do this.... Second, I do that...", and it sounds about the same in English, then I need to put a comma after it. On the other hand, if the first word is just a reference to timing when something happened, you don't need that extra breath, and you don't need a comma.
October 27, 2020
There are a lot of good things happened with me today fortunately. 😂 And I had been waiting for good things to happen for a long time. In the last few months just bad things happened with me 😕 I don't even have any good things to remember in the last few months. Today, my sister gave a birth to her daughter and it's a very special day because I became an aunt finally and I'm very glad about that😊. So l went to the hospital to help my sister taking care of her daughter. And I took an assortment of sweet to celebrate the birth of my neice.
Jaja great ☺️
October 28, 2020
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Esraa Alhowary
Language Skills
Arabic, Arabic (Levantine), Arabic (Modern Standard), English
Learning Language
English