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Hello ! i hope You re going well !! if someone can to correct my text !? thanks so much πŸ™ : μ˜€λŠ˜μ€ μ‚Άμ˜ 변화에 β€‹β€‹λŒ€ν•΄ 이야기 ν•˜κ² μ–΄μš” μ €λŠ” "생λͺ…μ˜ 재건"μ•  λŒ€ν•΄ 말할 수 μžˆμ–΄μš”. ν–‰λ³΅ν•˜μ§€λ§Œ λ„μ‹œμ— λ‘λ €μ›Œμš”. λ‹€μ‹œ μ‹œμž‘ν•΄μ•Ό 돼 λ¬΄μ„œμ›Œμš” ! 그런데, λͺ¨λ“  것을  λ‹€μ‹œν•˜κ³  μƒˆλ‘œμš΄ 것을  μ‹œμž‘ν•  수 μžˆμ–΄μ„œ ν–‰λ³΅ν•΄μš”! κ·Έλž˜μ„œ, λ‚΄κ°€ μ˜¬λ°”λ₯Ό 길을 κ°€λ©΄ λͺ¨λ“  것이 μ—¬μ „νžˆ μ„±μ·¨ 될 수 μžˆμ–΄μš”! λ‹Ήμ‹ μ˜ 인생 역점을 μ–΄λ–»κ²Œ μžˆμ–΄μš”?
Feb 27, 2021 4:33 PM
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Hello ! i hope You re going well !! if someone can to correct my text !? thanks so much πŸ™ : μ˜€λŠ˜μ€ μ‚Άμ˜ 변화에 β€‹β€‹λŒ€ν•΄ 이야기 ν•˜κ² μ–΄μš” μ €λŠ” "생λͺ…μ˜ 재건"μ•  λŒ€ν•΄ 말할 수 μžˆμ–΄μš”.(생λͺ…μ˜ 재건 can mean too big idea like fighting against global warming //μ‚Άμ˜ μž¬κ±΄μ΄λž€) ν–‰λ³΅ν•˜μ§€λ§Œ λ„μ‹œμ—(λ™μ‹œμ—) λ‘λ €μ›Œμš”. λ‹€μ‹œ μ‹œμž‘ν•΄μ•Ό 돼 λ¬΄μ„œμ›Œμš”(λ¬΄μ„­κ±°λ“ μš”) ! 그런데,(ν•˜μ§€λ§Œ) λͺ¨λ“  것을  λ‹€μ‹œν•˜κ³  μƒˆλ‘œμš΄ 것을(μƒˆλ‘­κ²Œ λ‹€μ‹œ)Β  μ‹œμž‘ν•  수 μžˆμ–΄μ„œ ν–‰λ³΅ν•΄μš”! κ·Έλž˜μ„œ(omitted), λ‚΄κ°€ μ˜¬λ°”λ₯Ό(μ œλŒ€λ‘œ 된) 길을 κ°€λ©΄(κ°„λ‹€λ©΄) λͺ¨λ“  것이 μ—¬μ „νžˆ(λͺ¨λ“  것듀이 λ‹€μ‹œ) μ„±μ·¨ 될 수 μžˆμ–΄μš”! λ‹Ήμ‹ μ˜ 인생 역점을 μ–΄λ–»κ²Œ μžˆμ–΄μš”?(ν˜Ήμ‹œ 당신도 μ΄λŸ¬ν•œ κ³„νšμ΄ μžˆλ‚˜μš”)
February 28, 2021
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