“a stagnant BODY OF WATER" "iDEOlogies" (I think I heard you miss a syllable, sounded more like "idologies" You can also try to improve your pronunciation of the "th" sound in English. It is very different from ठ or थ in Hindi, we don't pronounced the "t" or "h" individually, but instead as one sound. You can try looking at Youtube videos for best tips on how to pronounce this sound not in Hindi: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wCkONOv2JJM Other than those few mistakes and pronunciation improvements, amazing grammar and English! Great job!