Ofer LK
We are a country for 74 years old Country who suffered from hate, wars ect. altough, we are very proud what our founders and us get in so short time. We getting all the jews in the world in open arms Our jews culture is get stronger here Our economy is very strong and we are one of the strong economies in the world Our manual responsibility is very strong, and we have thousands of groops that this is them goal, to help one each other Our army is the stronger in all the middle east
Feb 23, 2021 3:32 PM
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We are a country that is 74 years old, a country [who] which has suffered hate, war [ect] etc. [although] However, we are very proud of what our founders and [us] ourselves [get] have achieved in so short a time / such a short time. We [getting] welcome /accept all (the) Jews [in] from throughout the world [in] with open arms. Our Jewish culture is [get] becoming stronger. Our economy is very strong, and we are one of the strongest /leading economies in the world Our [manual] community responsibility is very strong, and we have thousands of groups whose [this is them] goal /purpose is to help one another /each other Our army is the strongest in the Middle East.
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Feb 23, 2021 7:06 PM
We are a 74-year-old country that suffered from hate, wars, and persecution. Although, we are proud of what our founders and we have managed to achieve in such a short time. We are continuing to welcome all Jews in our open arms. Our Jews culture is getting stronger in this Country. Our economy is strong, and we are one of the strongest economies in the world. Our manual responsibility is strong, and we have thousands of groups dedicated to helping one another. Our army is stronger in all the Middle East.
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Feb 23, 2021 6:27 PM
My country was founded 74 years ago. The Country who has suffered a lot with hate, wars etc., altough, we proud our founders who get us in very short time. We are welcoming all the jews around the world with open arms, Our jews culture is beautiful and getting stronger day by day. Our economy is very strong and we are one of the strongest economy holder in the world. Our manual responsibility is very strong, and we have thousands of groups and their goal is "to help one each other". Our army is the strongest army in the middle east.
Feb 23, 2021 6:25 PM
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Ofer LK
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English, Hebrew
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English