Anderson
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A few days ago, Brazil was struck by shocking news when its citizens learned that congresswoman Flordelis dos Santos de Souza was the main suspect of being the mentor of her own husband's murder. It all started when Anderson, Flordelis's husband, was mysteriously shot to death on June 16, 2019. At the time, Flordelis's advisor issued a note to the press saying that the congresswoman ''was shaken to the core'' with her lost. More than a year past,  the police, who worked with the hypothesis of execution since the very beginning, concluded that Flordelis was actually the mentor of the crime. According to the invertigation, Flordelis decided to kill her husband because she couldn't stand him menaging her financial life anymore. Both were evangelical pastors. Flordelis remains in liberty since her post in the Congress gives her privileges. Now, it's up to the Congress to decide if she can be incarcerated or not.
Oct 3, 2020 2:39 PM
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A few days ago, Brazil was struck by shocking news when its citizens learned that Congresswoman Flordelis dos Santos de Souza was the main suspect in her own husband's murder. It all started when Anderson, Flordelis's husband, was mysteriously shot to death on June 16, 2019. At the time, Flordelis's advisor issued a statement to the press saying that the congresswoman ''was shaken to the core'' by her loss. More than a year past, the police, who worked with the hypothesis of execution from the very beginning, concluded that Flordelis was actually the author of the crime. According to the invertigation, Flordelis decided to kill her husband because she couldn't stand him managing her finances anymore. Both were evangelical pastors. Flordelis remains at liberty since her post in the Congress gives her privileges. Now, it's up to the Congress to decide if she can be incarcerated or not.
When you say “mentor of the crime,” do you mean that she is the one that actually killed him or just thought it up and someone else killed him? “Mentor” does not work, maybe “author.” Good job!
October 20, 2020
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