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Hi. I'm trying to make sentences based on the grammar I just learned. Can someone please check it for me if there is mistake? Thank you very much in advance. 🙇 Because the lady worker at the cafe spill the coffee on me, I get a set of free coffee and cake. I saw her boss scold her, but I think it would be nice of he can just speak kindly to her. At the end I decided to pay for the coffee and cake. This way, I can help both of them. カフェーの店員の女性は私にコーヒーを溢れちゃったから、無料のコーヒーとケーキのセットをまらいます。店長はあの女性に怒るのは見えてしまったけどゆっくり優しい声が伝わったらいいと思います。結局無料のコーヒーとケーキのセットは払い決まります。このように二人は助けさせてできます。
Oct 18, 2020 6:27 AM
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Hi. I'm trying to make sentences based on the grammar I just learned. Can someone please check it for me if there is mistake? Thank you very much in advance. 🙇 Because the lady worker at the cafe spill the coffee on me, I get a set of free coffee and cake. I saw her boss scold her, but I think it would be nice of he can just speak kindly to her. At the end I decided to pay for the coffee and cake. This way, I can help both of them. カフェの店員の女性は私のコーヒーをこぼしたから、無料でコーヒーとケーキのセットをくれました。店長がその女性店員に怒るのが見えてしまったけど、私の優しい思いが伝わったらいいと思い、結局無料のコーヒーとケーキのセットの料金払うことにきめました。こうしめ、二人を助けることができました。 ★よくできています! 少しでもお役に立てればうれしいです。 私はItalkiでレッスンをしており、会話、リーディング、リスニングの練習もできますので、興味があればぜひメッセージをください! ぜひ、私のプロフィールもチェックしてくださいね! I hope my correction help you a little. If you'd like to practice speaking/reading/listening, I'd be happy to help you in my lesson! Feel free to look at my teaching profile and class offerings and send me a message if you think I can help you.
October 18, 2020
Hi. I'm trying to make sentences based on the grammar I just learned. Can someone please check it for me if there is mistake? Thank you very much in advance. 🙇 Because the lady worker at the cafe spill the coffee on me, I get a set of free coffee and cake. I saw her boss scold her, but I think it would be nice of he can just speak kindly to her. At the end I decided to pay for the coffee and cake. This way, I can help both of them. カフェの店員の女性は私にコーヒーをこぼしちゃったから、コーヒーとケーキのセットを無料でもらいました。店長がその女性に怒るのが見えてしまいました。(店長は)ゆっくり優しい声で伝えたらいいと思います。結局、無料のコーヒーとケーキのセットの料金を払うことにしました。このようにすれば、二人を助けることができます。
October 18, 2020
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jiha_ray
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English, Japanese, Korean, Malay
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