Adiba Maheen
It is quite difficult tast but nothing is impossible Important thing is focus on topic, which type of crime we want reduce or remove in our society, First one is good education And next and special thing from my point of view is some people have criminal mind , councling is best method,but some people don't understand only words then these types of people entitled for punishment because crime always hurt other person specially innocent people and in this world everyone wants peaceful life
Sep 30, 2021 10:02 PM
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It is quite a difficult task, but nothing is impossible The important thing is focus on which type of crime we want to reduce or remove in society. The first topic concerning reducing crime is good education. The next thing is that for some people have criminal minds, counseling is the best method, but some people don't understand only words (??). Then these types of people are [what kinds of people?] entitled for punishment because crime always hurts others, especially innocent people, and everyone wants a peaceful life. Some comments: *Infinitive forms English verbs have a 'to' in front of the verb. Thus, '..we want TO reduce' is the grammatically correct way to describe your idea. *In more formally written English, it helps to be specific! Saying 'thing' is a bit too casual. *In your last sentence, you could say 'everyone wants A peaceful life', or 'everyone wants peaceful liveS'.
Please let me know if you have any more questions! (:
Sep 30, 2021 10:48 PM
It's quite a difficult task, but nothing is impossible The most important thing is to focus on the question of what kind of crime we want to reduce or eliminate in our society, The first is good education And the next and special one from mine The point of view is that some people are criminals, counseling is the best method, but some not only understand the words, then these types of people have the right to punishment because crimes always hurt other people, especially innocent people and for everyone in this world . want a peaceful life
Sep 30, 2021 10:14 PM
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Adiba Maheen
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