Yevhenii
Is this written correctly? "I like to spend my time in different ways. First of all i want to learned English at an advanced level. But when I have free time I see movies or YouTube, listen music or audiobooks, do it sports, or just go to sleep a little bit earlier. At the summer I ride on the bike🚮, swimming🏊, running🏃, sometimes ride on the rollersđŸ›Œ or skateboardđŸ›č. At the winter I ride on the snowboard🏂, and sometimes to ski⛷ and ice skating⛞. And I tried to play guitar, piano and drums." and this one: "I see the beautiful car which stoped at the roadside. It looks like new, but we know that car with shape like this don't make anymore. They were stop released many years ago. I like the colour of this car. And I would like to drive it on the highway.”
Apr 10, 2022 6:49 PM
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I would suggest: "I like to spend my time doing different things. First of all, i want to learn English to an advanced level. When I have free time, I watch movies or YouTube videos, listen to music or audiobooks, do sports, or just go to sleep a little bit earlier. In the summer I like to ride a bike, swim or run. Sometimes I go roller skating or skateboarding. In the winter, I like snowboarding and sometimes I go skiing or ice skating. And I also like to play guitar, piano and drums." "I'm looking at a beautiful car that's stoped by the side of the road. I like the color. The car looks new, but I know that they don't make cars shaped like that anymore. They quit making them many years ago. I sure wish I could take it out for a drive on the highway.”
April 10, 2022
Very well written. A few minor items, to sound more native: I want to learn English; I watch movies, listen to music; do sports; In the Summer I ride my bike, swim, run, ... ; In the winter ... sometimes ski and ice skate. ... car which was stopped at ... ; It looks new, but we know that a car with a shape like this is not made anymore. They stopped making them many years ago. Otherwise, well, done. Keep writing!
April 10, 2022
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