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A letter in English.:)


I want to write a letter in present.

If you want to correct me so just go on.:)


Hi dear Agnes!


It is a long time that  I have not written to you. Fisrt of all I have an apology to make to you and second I am coming back home. Yes, I have finished my education  and thinking to come back there. I have  also gotten a letter that I can work there. It was a long time that I was far away from home and now it is time to see you again. You are the best friend. I also have worked during holidays so I can pay back your money.:)


I wish you the best and see you soon.

 Your friend M.


Jul 22, 2016 1:32 PM
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II would have written like thia, perhaps, bearing in mind that English is only my second language, I'm not fluent:

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Dear Agnes,

It's been a long time since I last wrote to you. Firstly I have an apology to make, and secondly I want to tell you I'm coming back home. Yes, I've finished my education now, and am thinking about going back. I've also received a work permit showing I'm allowed to work there. I was away from home for a long time, and now it's time to see you again. You are /after all/ my best friend. I've also been working during the holidays so I'll be able to pay back what I owe you. I wish you the very best and see you soon. Your friend M. 

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I've noticed that the English often throw in a couple of crosses xx at the end of personal letters, but I really don't understand when and why they use it, or to whom, but it seems it's to add more affection like a smiley or something. I hope someone fluent could explain. It seems handy but you wouldn't want to use it the wrong way, obviously.

July 22, 2016