tangrui
Can u help me to check out my composition?  I am a beginer in learning English.  and i   think there are a lot of mistakes in   my compositions . but i dont know  where are they  and how to express  right.  So can  u  help me ?
Sep 4, 2016 12:54 PM
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If you post not too long compositions, someone will surely be glad to help you.
September 4, 2016
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Hello,

Like <a ui-sref="user({id:comment.commenter_obj.id})" href="https://www.italki.com/user/3068283" style="line-height: 1.5; color: rgb(149, 149, 149); outline: 0px; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);">♥ PTA ♠</a> mentioned, someone will surely be glad to help you if you post the composition (even if long). And if someone doesn't help, then at least you asked and tried. Better to try and fail, than fail and not try. 

Have a great day, and hopefully someone can help you with taking a look and reviewing your composition. You never know, maybe even I can help you if I have the time.

 


September 4, 2016
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Correcting compositions is quite a lot of work so maybe you should get a teacher to help you with that. Most people here on italki don't really have the time to help you with it.

Good luck

September 4, 2016
thank u  so much.  i will insist on writing . I think   my compostions are too long to reading.     if u guys notice my compostions, i  am so happy ur reading and help.  
September 8, 2016
Thank u so much.  I think u r right . most of us are busy.   I have a teacher and  I will insist on writing to improve my English.   Thank u.
September 4, 2016