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Compose a story!

Hello, hello friends,

Let's compose a story and use these words: a garden, a gardener, flowers, a river,a  key, a forest and a bear. Describe these words as you can. I did it and I liked it. Results are very interesting and not dangerous . At the same time you can improve your writting skill:)

Sep 15, 2016 11:28 AM
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Once upon a time there was a Gardener who lived with his wife in Randomland.

One night he got drunk on milk chocolate, and came up with a brilliant plan to build the biggest flower garden in the Enchanted Forest. It was a place filled with many weird and dangerous creatures, particularly a fearsome bear called Dada. 

Eventually the Gardener got lost in the Enchanted Forest. He tried checking Google Maps but apparently there was no GPS signal in the forest. He shouted in frustration, causing the trees to stir. The gardener then heard a menacing growl in the nearby bushes and grew uneasy. Cold sweat fell from his brow. Suddenly a huge shadow hovered towards him.

It turned out to be the Dada the bear. Suddenly Dada started dancing and laughing. The Gardener was so surprised he danced together with the bear. All the creatures also started dancing and it became like a musical. As they were dancing, Dada and the Gardener tripped over a branch and fell into the Hudson River. The bear sadly drowned and reincarnated into a Rainbow Key within split seconds and the Gardener grabbed hold of the key. The Rainbow Key instantly turned into an Uber driver and his car. The Uber driver told the Gardener that it's time to go back home, and that his wife was worried.They drove back to the Gardener's house.

Back home, his wife was waiting for him with an angry look and slapped him in the face and made him apologize for running off and not taking care of their own garden at home. The Gardener apologized to his wife and learned his lesson to never get drunk on milk chocolate ever again. The end. :)

September 16, 2016

I want to appreciate you Leyla for this wonderful effort. I have made a small story. 

A big city is located next to the river. This city has so many beautiful places for their citizens and tourists. Brono Zoo is one of them. This zoo is famous for its play land, food court and artificial water falls. There is a garden that increases the beauty of zoo. This garden is full of precious trees and plants having beautiful flowers. A gardener is responsible for this garden who take care all the trees and plants. So many wild life animals are there in this zoo. Now days this garden is full of families. Reason of this huge crowd is new entry of a giant wild bear. This bear came from a forest of Africa. A big steel cage has developed especially for this wild bear. This cage has special lock and only a special key can unlock this cage. People are coming and enjoying with family and friends.

September 15, 2016

I think this is a very interesting way of improving writing skills. I will try to compose a little story.Maybe it is the most plain story.


There is a small town named X. In this small town, the residents all make a living by planting flowers. There are many gardens in this small town. But there is only one river named R in X. So R plays a key role in supporting the growth of plants. The gardeners all irrgate flowers using water from R. X is a very beatiful town. In spring, when the flower all open, even bears in the forest get drunk in the smell of flowers.



September 15, 2016

Sudeep

It is a wonderful story. I think you like baby girls. You will have happy family. Maybe you have already a family:)


Gvantsa

Well done. You always have great ideas to do good things, are not you?

September 21, 2016

Nur Salaam

I liked your story. I think you like milk chocolate.Then when I will say results, you will laugh at your story:)

September 17, 2016
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