Check my essay, please
Please check my essay on the topic: Pause whatever you’re doing, and ask the person nearest you what they’re thinking about (call someone if you have to). Write an essay based on it.
It was a cold April evening, when I have been sitting with my dog and drinking strong tea. In such moments you don't want to think about the problems and troubles. Tea warms the body and good mood warms the soul. Nothing boded ill.. Until I decided to write an essay on a given topic.
When I saw the topic, I was a little embarrassed, because I thought the question "what are you thinking about?" is quite intimate and didn't know who to ask. But at this point I was texting with my friend Anne and asked her. I expected that it would confuse her, but she responded just 30 seconds.
"Well, I’m thinking about the future, about the exam, which I'm not ready. That I need to get fit by summer. What to gift boyfriend for his birthday. How to align the teeth by not expensive. Where to get the money. Why nobody presents me a doberman?"
Then I thought, what the girls are beautiful creatures. Only we can instantly provide answers to strange questions and not even think about their oddities. Only we can remain positive, even in the sad moments of life. Only we have in mind the chaos at the same time with a logical sequence of thoughts.
When I read the book "Men are from Mars, women are from Venus" by John Gray, it said that women's thoughts are arranged miraculously. One thought in the chain affects the other two, using the Association, in fact, forming three different thoughts, which immediately forming others. I think men would have gone crazy, hitting in our head. Perhaps due to the fact that we are so inconsistent in our thoughts, men are afraid of our unpredictability. But on the other hand it makes the female mystique and mysterious individuality.
So yeah, nothing boded ill.