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Overall, the dominance of women in physical activities was prevalent. in the age of 15 to 24 the males proportion in doing works out was higher than women but, this scenario was quite opposite in other age groups.
In the first age group, women did less activity than men by approximately 5%. surprisingly, in the next four age groups women overshadowed men significantly. In the age of 25 till 34, the difference was about 6% and the highest difference occured in 35 to 44 where 13 percent more women did work outs. the notable differences were followed in 45to 54 and 55 to 64 by around 10% and 8% respectively.
In the last group there was parity between men and women and and only 0.4% more women did physical activity than men.