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Moving from a capital city to a small industrial town means reducing <a style="color: rgb(55, 96, 146);" href="https://dictionary.cambridge.org/it/dizionario/inglese-italiano/the" target="_blank" rel="noopener noreferrer">the</a> operating <a style="color: rgb(55, 96, 146);" href="https://dictionary.cambridge.org/it/dizionario/inglese-italiano/costs" target="_blank" rel="noopener noreferrer">costs</a> <a style="color: rgb(55, 96, 146);" href="https://dictionary.cambridge.org/it/dizionario/inglese-italiano/of" target="_blank" rel="noopener noreferrer">of</a> <a style="color: rgb(55, 96, 146);" href="https://dictionary.cambridge.org/it/dizionario/inglese-italiano/the" target="_blank" rel="noopener noreferrer">the</a> <a style="color: rgb(55, 96, 146);" href="https://dictionary.cambridge.org/it/dizionario/inglese-italiano/company" target="_blank" rel="noopener noreferrer">company</a>, a lower average rent for example
The town council offered us tax incentives to relocate to their town and, for our part, we will able to create new employment opportunities for local inhabitants.
This solution (to relocate) may <a style="color: rgb(55, 96, 146);" href="https://dictionary.cambridge.org/it/dizionario/inglese-italiano/affect" target="_blank" rel="noopener noreferrer">affect</a> our staff <a style="color: rgb(55, 96, 146);" href="https://dictionary.cambridge.org/it/dizionario/inglese-italiano/motivation" target="_blank" rel="noopener noreferrer">motivation</a> <a style="color: rgb(55, 96, 146);" href="https://dictionary.cambridge.org/it/dizionario/inglese-italiano/and" target="_blank" rel="noopener noreferrer">and</a> <a style="color: rgb(55, 96, 146);" href="https://dictionary.cambridge.org/it/dizionario/inglese-italiano/performance" target="_blank" rel="noopener noreferrer">performance</a> because they now have to drive more than a hundred km every day to go to work.
Jun 9, 2020 12:48 PM
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Moving from a capital city to a small industrial town means reducing <a href="https://dictionary.cambridge.org/it/dizionario/inglese-italiano/the" rel="noopener noreferrer" target="_blank" style="color: rgb(55, 96, 146);">the</a> operating <a href="https://dictionary.cambridge.org/it/dizionario/inglese-italiano/costs" rel="noopener noreferrer" target="_blank" style="color: rgb(55, 96, 146);">costs</a> <a href="https://dictionary.cambridge.org/it/dizionario/inglese-italiano/of" rel="noopener noreferrer" target="_blank" style="color: rgb(55, 96, 146);">of</a> <a href="https://dictionary.cambridge.org/it/dizionario/inglese-italiano/the" rel="noopener noreferrer" target="_blank" style="color: rgb(55, 96, 146);">the</a> <a href="https://dictionary.cambridge.org/it/dizionario/inglese-italiano/company" rel="noopener noreferrer" target="_blank" style="color: rgb(55, 96, 146);">company</a>, such as a lower average rent for example

The town council offered us tax incentives to relocate to their town and, for our part, we will be able to create new employment opportunities for local residents. [is a abetter word for this context]
The decision (to relocate) may <a href="https://dictionary.cambridge.org/it/dizionario/inglese-italiano/affect" rel="noopener noreferrer" target="_blank" style="color: rgb(55, 96, 146);">affect</a> our staff <a href="https://dictionary.cambridge.org/it/dizionario/inglese-italiano/motivation" rel="noopener noreferrer" target="_blank" style="color: rgb(55, 96, 146);">motivation</a> <a href="https://dictionary.cambridge.org/it/dizionario/inglese-italiano/and" rel="noopener noreferrer" target="_blank" style="color: rgb(55, 96, 146);">and</a> <a href="https://dictionary.cambridge.org/it/dizionario/inglese-italiano/performance" rel="noopener noreferrer" target="_blank" style="color: rgb(55, 96, 146);">performance</a> because they now have to drive more than a hundred kilometres every day to go to work.

Very good well done.


June 9, 2020
martina
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