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The Yellow River [also❊] allows different cultures to mingle here:
❊<em style="color: rgb(136, 136, 136);">this word applies if you have already made a comment about the Yellow River</em>
Islam, Christianity, Buddhism, Taoism, music made by /played on [musical] instruments from the West and from all over China.
Together they weave into a concerto.