Need Help to converse.
<font face="Arial" size="2">Another trial conversation in a railway station:I have written what I meant in English,and my attempt in Hindi.Please correct the mistakes in the Hindi version.</font>
<font face="Arial" size="2">1. In which platform does G.T Express arrive?</font>
<font face="Arial" size="2"> Kaunsa platform mei G.T Express Aayaeghi?</font>
<font face="Arial" size="2">2.What time it wil leave?</font>
<font face="Arial" size="2"> Kitna baje woh chutaeghi?</font>
<font face="Arial" size="2">3.Coolie! Come here. You have to take these items to platform no.3.How much should I give you?</font>
<font face="Arial" size="2"> Coolie! Idhar aavo.Tum yeh saaman platform no.3 ko lena hai.Kitna paisa dena hai?</font>
<font face="Arial" size="2">4. All these items are very light. You are asking too much.I will give only 50 Rs.I cannot give you more than that.</font>
<font face="Arial" size="2"> Sabhi Saaman halka hain.Tum bahuth Jyadha kah rahe ho. Mein sirf pachas rupea doonghi.Mein uske jyadha nahin dae sakthi hoon.</font>
<font face="Arial" size="2"> 5. Ok.Leave it.I will call another coolie.</font><font face="Arial" size="2"> </font>
<font face="Arial" size="2"> Teak hai.Chodo.Mein Doosra coolie ko bulaoonghi.</font>
<font face="Arial" size="2">6.We will take the items ourselves.</font>
<font face="Arial" size="2"> Hum koodh saaman lae chalanghae.</font>
<font face="Arial" size="2">7. Take the items fast .The platform is far.The train is going to start in 15 mins.</font>
<font face="Arial" size="2"> Saaman jaldi lae chal .Platform door hai.Gaadi pandrah mins mei chutnaewaali hai.</font>
<font face="Arial" size="2">8.Keep the items carefully under the seat.</font>
<font face="Arial" size="2"> Seat ke neechae saaman saavadhan ko rakho.
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