Need Help to converse.
<div><font face="Arial" size="2">Another trial conversation in a railway station:I have written what I meant in English,and&nbsp;my attempt&nbsp;in Hindi.Please correct the mistakes in the Hindi version.</font></div>
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<div><font face="Arial" size="2">1. In which platform does G.T Express arrive?</font></div>
<div><font face="Arial" size="2">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; Kaunsa platform mei G.T Express&nbsp; Aayaeghi?</font></div>
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<div><font face="Arial" size="2">2.What time it&nbsp; wil leave?</font></div>
<div><font face="Arial" size="2">&nbsp;&nbsp; Kitna baje woh chutaeghi?</font></div>
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<div><font face="Arial" size="2">3.Coolie! Come here. You have to take these items to platform no.3.How much should I give you?</font></div>
<div><font face="Arial" size="2">&nbsp;Coolie! Idhar aavo.Tum yeh saaman platform no.3 ko lena hai.Kitna paisa dena hai?</font></div>
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<div><font face="Arial" size="2">4. All these items are very light. You are asking too much.I will give only 50 Rs.I cannot give you more than that.</font></div>
<div><font face="Arial" size="2">&nbsp;&nbsp; Sabhi Saaman halka hain.Tum bahuth Jyadha kah rahe ho. Mein sirf pachas rupea doonghi.Mein uske jyadha nahin dae sakthi hoon.</font></div>
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<div><font face="Arial" size="2">&nbsp;5.&nbsp;Ok.Leave it.I will&nbsp;call&nbsp; another coolie.</font><font face="Arial" size="2">&nbsp;&nbsp;</font></div>
<div><font face="Arial" size="2">&nbsp; Teak hai.Chodo.Mein Doosra coolie ko bulaoonghi.</font></div>
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<div><font face="Arial" size="2">6.We will take the items ourselves.</font></div>
<div><font face="Arial" size="2">&nbsp; Hum koodh saaman lae chalanghae.</font></div>
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<div><font face="Arial" size="2">7. Take the items fast .The platform is far.The train is going to start in 15 mins.</font></div>
<div><font face="Arial" size="2">&nbsp;&nbsp; Saaman jaldi lae chal .Platform door hai.Gaadi pandrah mins mei chutnaewaali hai.</font></div>
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<div><font face="Arial" size="2">8.Keep the items carefully under the seat.</font></div>
<div><font face="Arial" size="2">&nbsp; Seat ke neechae saaman saavadhan ko rakho.<br />
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<p>mje wriitten hindi seekhni hai.kya app meri help kary gi??</p>

Thanks Natasha for pointing out mistakes and correcting.I wasn't in town and so the delay in replying.Thank you.

8.&nbsp; seat ke neechae saaman theekse sambhalkar rakho.<br />
7.&nbsp; correct - but just say 'chalo' it sounds polite.&nbsp;<br />
6.&nbsp; ok<br />
5.&nbsp; theek hain, rahane do, mein doosare coolie ko bulaoonghi<br />
4. Great!!! only 'usase' and not 'usake'<br />
3. <font size="2">Coolie! Idhar aao.yeh saaman platform no.3 par&nbsp;lejana&nbsp;hai. Kitna logae?<br />
2. Kitnae baje&nbsp;chutaeghi?<br />
1. Kaunsae platform par&nbsp;G.T Express&nbsp; Aayaegi?</font>