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Bangkok, my hometown is a special city. Bangkok is in Thailand. Thailand is the country in South-east Asia. My hometown was the capital of Thailand. There are many good people in my hometown. When there is a problem, they are always ready to help. There are many kinds of food stall in Bangkok. Bangkok is the best city in the world for street food. In the summer, it is too hot. We have a festival in Thailand. It’s called “Songkran”. It’s the most famous festival. There is Thai New Year’s national holiday. As a festival unity, people who have moved away usually return home their loved one and elder. Paying reverence to ancestors is an important part of Songkran traditional. The holiday is known for its water festival. Major street as arenas for water fights. People splashing water on each other. I love my hometown. It is a special place for me.
Sep 26, 2018 4:09 AM
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Bangkok, my hometown, is a special city. Bangkok is in Thailand. Thailand is the a country in South-east Southeast Asia. My hometown was is the capital of Thailand. There are many good people in my hometown. When there is a problem, they are always ready to help. There are many kinds of food stall stalls in Bangkok. Bangkok is the best city in the world for street food. In the summer, it is too hot. We have a festival in Thailand. It’s called Songkran. It’s the most famous festival in the country. There It is the Thai New Year national holiday. As It is a festival unity, so people who have moved away usually return home to their loved ones and elders. Paying reverence to ancestors is an important part of the Songkran traditional tradition. The holiday is known for its water festival. Major street streets are used as arenas for water fights. People splashing splash water on each other. I love my hometown. It is a special place for me.Bangkok is lovely! You're doing really well, just make sure you use two spaces between sentences :)
September 26, 2018
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Eva_PJ
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English, Thai
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