Glaly
My cute little sister Yesterday, we went to the cake shop to buy some cakes. On the way home, Mum bought me a snake, and gave my sister a snake too. We chose one that we like. My sister's snake was bigger than mine. She ate very fast, and finished it in a few time. She wanted more. And she wanted to eat my snake. So she said,"Give me a little piece of it, please?" But I had no choice, because she liked a crazy girl to rob mine. I gave her the remanent piece of my cake. She ate it like a little beggar, and she said it was delicious. She promised she would write a simple article when we arrived home. When my sister finished the article, she was very pleasant and I thought her article was very well.
Feb 27, 2021 6:59 AM
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My cute little sister. Yesterday, we went to the cake shop to buy some cakes. On the way home, my mum bought me a cake, and gave my sister a cake too. We chose the ones that we liked. My sister's cake was bigger than mine. She ate very fast, and finished it quickly. She wanted more and she wanted to eat my cake. So she said: "Give me a little piece of it, please?" I had no choice, because she would steal mine if I refused. I gave her the remaining piece of my cake. She ate it like a little beggar, and she said it was delicious. She promised she would write a simple article when we arrived home. When my sister finished the article, she was very pleased and I thought her article was very good.
Feb 27, 2021 7:33 AM
My cute little sister Yesterday, we went to the cake shop to buy some cakes. On the way home, Mum bought me a snake, and gave my sister a snake too. We chose one that we like. My sister's snake was bigger than mine. She ate very fast, and finished it in a few time. She wanted more. And she wanted to eat my snake. So she said,"Give me a little piece of it, please?" But I had no choice, because she liked a crazy girl to rob mine. I gave her the remanent piece of my cake. She ate it like a little beggar, and she said it was delicious. She promised she would write a simple article when we arrived home. When my sister finished the article, she was very pleasant and I thought her article was very well.
A snake is 蛇 A snack is 好吃 My university students make this mistake! :-) I was born in 蛇年! 你妹妹很可爱的!
Feb 27, 2021 8:14 AM
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Glaly
Language Skills
Chinese (Mandarin), English, Japanese
Learning Language
English