Anna
When I travel I enjoy eating out. Once upon a time I came to Krasnoyarsk. At the time I wanted to be in an original place. I decided to visit Witcher Bar. My friends told me about this place. They suggested me visiting this bar because it was a very strange but authentic place. I remembered my friend's advice and headed toward the Witcher Bar. The bar comprised two mid-size, dimly-lit, and fairly clean room that smelled beer and snacks. There wasn't window because the Witcher situated on basement. If you played "Witcher" in PC you would understand how this bar was looked. It was look like a real bar from the Witcher. Shields, swords and magic signs hung on the walls. The rooms was lit with the stubs of candles sitting on rough wooden tables. The floor seemed at first glance to be true stone. It was a very atmospheric place. Everything is as I love it.
Sep 26, 2021 12:33 PM
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When I travel,(1) I enjoy eating out. Once upon a time I went (2) to Krasnoyarsk. At the time,(1) I wanted to be in a unique/interesting place. I decided to visit Witcher Bar. My friends had told (3) me about this place. They suggested that I visit (4) this bar because it was a very strange, (5) but authentic place. I remembered my friends’ (6) advice and headed off to the Witcher Bar. The bar comprised two mid-size, dimly-lit, and fairly clean rooms that smelled of beer and food. There were no windows because the Witcher is situated in a basement. If you've played Witcher on your computer,(1) you would understand how this bar looked. It looked like a real bar from Witcher. Shields, swords and magic signs hung on the walls. The rooms was lit by candle stubs on rough wooden tables. The floor seemed at first glance to be true stone. It was a very atmospheric place. Everything was as I love it.
1. Always separate the subject of the sentence from the words that come before it with a comma. 2. COME is towards the speaker, GO is away from the speaker. 3. If your friends told you about it BEFORE you went, then they HAD TOLD you about it when you went. 4. SUGGEST and RECOMMEND are followed by THAT: I recommend that you read this book/watch this movie, etc. 5. Always use a comma before BUT. 6. If this pertains to the advice of your friendS, then it’s FRIENDS’, not FRIEND’S.
Sep 26, 2021 12:57 PM
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Anna
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English, Korean, Russian
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English, Korean