Matteo Zoccolan
Would you correct my article? In every school year, students are obliged to study science subjects such as mats, biology and chemistry, even if they don’t like it. Research reveals that students who are keen on human subjects find lot of difficulties studying science subjects. First of all, on the one hand it is true that it is important to have a basic knowledge of science subjects. On the other hand, it is unnecessary to study them every school year in order to learn the basis. Some students fed up with mats, biology and chemistry, so it is important that at a certain time they can follow their way studying subjects that are useful for their future. Secondly, it cannot deny that there are lot of future careers in science. According to research, nowadays there aren’t enough application for science careers. The demanding of teachers in science subjects is increasing. In conclusion, as far as I am concerned, syllabus’s school should be modified as students could choose to follow the subjects they are interesting in. Studying subjects while zoning out it is not good and it does not improve students’ knowledge.
Feb 19, 2021 6:26 PM
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Would you correct my article? In every school year, students are obliged to study science subjects such as maths, biology and chemistry, even if they don’t like them. Research reveals that students who are keen on human subjects (humanities) have a lot of difficulty studying science subjects. First of all, on the one hand it is true that it is important to have a basic knowledge of science subjects. On the other hand, it is unnecessary to study them every school year in order to learn the basics. Some students get fed up with maths, biology and chemistry, so it is important that at a certain time they can follow their interests by studying subjects that are useful for their future. However, it cannot be denied that there are lot of future careers in science. According to research, nowadays there aren’t enough applications for science careers. The demand for teachers in science subjects is increasing. In conclusion, as far as I am concerned, the school syllabus should be modified so that students can choose to follow the subjects they are interested in. Studying subjects while zoning out (this is an informal phrase, 'losing concentration' is better) is not good and it does not improve students’ knowledge.
This is pretty good. Without seeing the question I don't know if you have answered it fully. Your paragraph about science careers contrasts with the previous paragraph so it is better to start it with 'However'.
Feb 19, 2021 7:17 PM
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Matteo Zoccolan
Language Skills
English, Italian
Learning Language
English