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Dear Rob It’s very exciting that you’ll get here soon. First of all let me say that you’ll love Lima. I strongly you to live in the north side of the city because there you could find many subway lines and a wide variety of flats with quite affordable prices and also they are very near to the university that you’ll attend to. As I said if you choose to live in the north side of the city you’ll get access to the main subway lines, actually the three main lines, which allow you to get most parts of the city in less of thirty minutes. You have to be careful with the public bus system, they aren’t very efficient and sometimes don’t meet their schedule at all so If I were you I’d prefer to avoid them. I know you’ll be looking forward to meeting friends, let me say that wouldn’t be difficult here since we have lots of activities to do on weekends after classes, for example I regularly attend a chess club and I’ve met bunch of kind and smart guys there. I’m looking forward to having you here ! Kind regards Kate
Mar 2, 2021 3:56 AM
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Dear Rob I am very excited that you will be here soon. First of all, let me say that you’ll love Lima. I strongly suggest that you live in the north side of the city because there, you could find many subway lines and a wide variety of flats with quite affordable prices. They are also near the university that you’ll attend. If you choose to live on the north side of the city, you’ll have access to the main subway lines. Actually, the three main lines which allow you to get to most parts of the city in less than thirty minutes. You have to be careful with the public bus system. They aren’t very efficient and sometimes they don’t meet their schedule at all. If I were you, I would avoid them. I know you’ll be looking forward to meeting new friends. That will not be difficult here since we have lots of weekend activities to do after classes. One example is I regularly attend a chess club where I’ve met a bunch of kind and smart guys. I’m looking forward to having you here ! Kind regards Kate
I believe correcting too much of the grammar of someone's writing, changes the intended tone of the writer. I will only add a few alternate ways to say a few things, maintaining the tone. Overall, this would be understood by your reader!
Mar 2, 2021 5:27 AM
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