Alex
Hi Guys, could you correct my text? At the Grocery Store Vanesa: Mom Ana: Daughter Ryan: Son Vanessa: Ana, Ryan, hurry up! We must go to the Grocery Store right now! Ana: Mom, why do we have to go to the Grocery Store now? Why is it so important? Couldn`t we go there tomorrow? Ryan to Ana: Mom is crazy because she wants to buy hair dye. I`ve seen her looking at the mirror and getting jumpy because her hair is getting white. Vanessa: What did you say, Ryan? I am listening to everything you are saying, kids and that is making me nervous! I`m gonna tell you what: We`re gonna go to the Grocery store now, and we`ll just go to the produce section. And guess what? We`ll have cucumber, broccoli and carrots for dinner. Ana and Ryan: Oh no!!!
Sep 23, 2021 12:48 AM
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Very good! I just slightly adjusted the part below to make it sound more natural. I'll tell you what: We're gonna go to the Grocery store now, and we'll just go to the produce section. And guess what! We're having cucumber, broccoli and carrots for dinner.
September 23, 2021
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