haruki.K
I am from Tokyo. There are a lot of place worth visiting in this huge city, but I would like to focus on the Tokyo's original townscape. As you might have already seen, the center of Tokyo is literally filled with monotone concrete. Many skyscrapers stand and small buildings fill in narrow gaps between them. And high way meanders like a snake. I know some people dislike this messy townscape lacking of healthy greenery. but I just like this modern scenery with sophisticated buildings, which has a mood of SF movies!!
Oct 26, 2020 1:16 PM
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I am from Tokyo. There are a lot of places worth visiting in this huge city, but I would like to focus on the Tokyo's original townscape. As you might have already seen, the center of Tokyo is literally filled with monotone concrete. Many skyscrapers stand, and small buildings fill in narrow gaps between them. Highway meanders like a snake. I know some people dislike this messy townscape, lacking of healthy greenery. But I just like this modern scenery with sophisticated buildings, which has a mood of SF movies!!
こんにちは。Hi this is very good! It just needed one or two corrections. For example; You put “And” at the beginning of a sentence. But in English we can’t do that as it is a conjunction (joining word). Well done!
October 27, 2020
I am from Tokyo. There are a lot of places worth visiting in this huge city, but I would like to focus on Tokyo's original townscape. As you might have already seen, the center of Tokyo is literally filled with monotone concrete. Many skyscrapers stand (tall) and small buildings fill in the narrow gaps between them. And the high way meanders like a snake. I know some people dislike this messy townscape lacking in healthy greenery, but I just like this modern scenery with sophisticated buildings, which has a mood (feel) of SF movies!!
October 26, 2020
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haruki.K
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English, French, Japanese, Spanish
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