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what is "LARP"? Live Action Role Playing games, which original in European counties and the United States, have become a trendy social action among young Chinese in recent years, according to the China Youth Daily.
Oct 27, 2020 5:08 AM
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What is "LARP"? Live Action Role Playing games, which/that originated in European countries and the United States. They have become trendy among young Chinese people in recent years, according to the China Youth Daily.
Good work! This is well written. Your last sentence might be better if you invert the clauses and put "according to the China Youth Daily" at the start.
October 27, 2020
what is "LARP"? Live Action Role Playing games, which was done originally in European counties and the United States, have become a trendy social action among young Chinese in recent years, according to the China Youth Daily.
That is interesting to know. Good information.
October 27, 2020
what is "LARP"? Live Action Role Playing games, which original in European counties and the United States, have become a trendy social action among young Chinese in recent years, according to the China Youth Daily.
originate not original. Should be a verb instead of a adjective
October 27, 2020
what is "LARP"? Live Action Role Playing games, which original in European counties and the United States, have become a trendy social action among young Chinese in recent years, according to the China Youth Daily.
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October 31, 2020
what is "LARP"? Live Action Role Playing games, which original in European counties and the United States, have become a trendy social action among young Chinese in recent years, according to the China Youth Daily.
Please accept my friend request
October 31, 2020
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