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It was my first day at work today. Thank God, everything went pretty well. When I walked into the building , I felt my heart beating so fast that even the heart of a guy falling in love would never beat like that. First they asked me to conduct a demo lesson . Afterwards a girl took me to the room close to the entrance , in which I had a follow-up interview with the manager. He asked me a couple of questions and took me out to introduce to the other teachers. He walked around with his hand placed on my shoulder and told everyone about me. He was friendly and he made me feel very welcome there. Please, Have a look at these place and correct them if they need any corrections.
Sep 28, 2021 1:29 PM
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It was my first day at work today. Thank God, everything went pretty well. When I walked into the building, I felt my heart beating so fast that even the heart of a guy falling in love would never beat like that. First they asked me to conduct a demo lesson. Afterwards a girl took me to a room close to the entrance, in which I had a follow-up interview with the manager. He asked me a couple of questions and took me out to introduce me to the other teachers. He walked around with his hand placed on my shoulder and told everyone about me. He was friendly and he made me feel very welcome there. Please have a look at the passage and correct it if it needs any correction.
Sounds like a friendly place to work... Good luck, it's wonderful to be able to share your talent with those keen to learn.
Sep 28, 2021 3:34 PM
It was my first day at work today. Thank God, everything went pretty well. When I walked into the building , I felt my heart beating so fast that even the heart of a guy falling in love would never beat like that. First they asked me to conduct a demo lesson . Afterwards a girl took me to the room close to the entrance , in which I had a follow-up interview with the manager. He asked me a couple of questions and took me out to introduce “me” to the other teachers. He walked around with his hand placed on my shoulder and told everyone about me. He was friendly and he made me feel very welcome there. Please, Have a look at these place and correct them if they need any corrections.
Addition of me as indicated in quotations. Otherwise, it looks good.
Sep 28, 2021 1:36 PM
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