1. (Your sentence was correct. I think it would be better if you say)
어제 먹고 나서 운동을 했어요
어제 먹은 후에 운동을 했어요. Yesterday I ate and did excercise
2. 내일은 일을 하고 영화관에 갈 거예요
Tomorrow i'll work and go to the movie theater
@ the movie theather = 영화관
3. (oh my god. is it true? lol)
커피 마시고 곰 보고 학교에 갔어요
I drank coffee, saw a bear and went to school
4. 개가 영화관 옆에서 먹고 있어요
The dog is eating next to the movie theater
@ the movie theather = 영화관
5. 선생님은 당신의 뒤에 있어요
선생님은 너의 뒤에 있어
The teacher is behind you
@ 선생, 너 = informal expression. You have to use 존댓말
6. 제가 이것을 해야 될까요?
I wonder if i have to do this?/ Do you think i have to do this
7. 이 책을 읽을까요? (good!)
Shall we read this book?
8. 한국어를 1년쯤 공부했어요 (good!)
I studied korean about 1 year
9. 어제 사탕을 다섯 개 정도 먹었어요
Yesterday i ate about 5 candies
@ 을,를,은,는,이,가 is very important for beginners I think :)
10. 내일은 개 두 마리정도를 볼 거예요
Tomorrow im going to see about 2 dogs
(Okay, I give you some advice about this.
Many people can't spell of 게요 these days even native Korean speakers!
께요 isn't right. you should use 게요 instead of 께요)
11. I did a little conversation i want to know if i use correctly 을/ㄹ 거예요/ 을/ㄹ 게요
언니: 이 책을 읽을게요 / Im going to read this book
동생: 진짜... 읽을거야? / Really... are you going to read it?
- If you want to ask something, don't use 게요.
- 찐자 (x) 진짜(o)
언니: 네!!! / Yes!!!
동생: 안돼!! >.< 난 읽고 싶어요!!! / Nooo!! >.< I want to read it!!!
- Check out the meaning of 안돼, 아니야
언니: ㅎㅎㅎ 미안해요!^^ 그 책을 읽을 거예요! 안녕~~ / hehe im sorry^^ im going to read that book! Goodbye~~
동생: ㅠ.ㅠ 나쁜 언니! / ㅠ.ㅠ Bad sister!
12. Last one..
어제 너무 피곤해서 학교에 안 갔어요 (Gooood)