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“I should punch you in the nose right now, you totally deserve it! Stupid.” Helen said fondly. Except she could never do that. James had such a nice little nose. That looked a bit funny when he laughed, and every once in a while you could see a smudge of ink there. Or toothpaste. Sometimes even chocolate. Oh, and that one time, a noodle (unfortunate incident involving noodle soup, a minor explosion and James foolish decision to sit within a ten feet radius from Helen and a stove).