posting an ad in correct English
I have to post an ad
Here is what I wrote, is it OK, do you have any corrections?
subject: getting students for our reading institute
For our new "Reading Institute" where students learn/improve their Hebrew reading skills using a pc software we need someone to look for potential student, to explain the advantages of our method, showing them the software, and make them our students.
PS
How do you call in English to the emloyee whos job is to look for students and make them take our courses?