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Hi could some one check my descriptive essay , i can help you with spanish The grinch is the main charácter from the movie “How The Grinch Stole Christmas” well known for his anti-christmas spirit he was always trying to spoild the event by doing mean things to the happy people whom live near him, He has a bitter-ill personallity when he is happy he looks like a Little puppy so sweet and calm, but when he is ungry his face turn on into the same mood making him so nasty . When people from the hood see him they just think that he is ugly but in general he has not an scary looking. His appareance is like a tall human, with longs arms, fingers and long legs, but just instead of a clear skin he is furry and Green. He is the owner of a quirky face also Green like his hole body but not furry, with the same characteristics as a french bull dog face without muzzel with a smal nose, small eyes and a wide mouth , and plenty of wrinkles .
Apr 29, 2016 12:38 AM
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In this format (A "Question" rather than a "Notebook Entry") I cannot highlight the changes that I made. This format (answering a "question") only allows for text. So I made corrections, but it is hard to tell where the corrections were made, unless you compare your original text with the text below. I think you did a great job describing the Grinch. I would suggest one thing to work on is your punctuation in English. Learn when to use commas, periods, when to capitalize words, and when it is best to start a new sentence. The Grinch is the main charácter from the movie “How The Grinch Stole Christmas.” He is well known for his anti-Christmas spirit, for example, in the movie, he was always trying to spoil Christmas by doing mean things to the happy people whom live near him. He has a bitter personality. When he is happy, he looks like a little puppy; so sweet and calm. But when he is angry, his face turns ugly making him appear nasty. When people from the neighborhood see him, they just think that he is ugly, but in general he is not scary looking. His appearance is like a tall human, with longs arms, fingers and long legs, but instead of a clear skin he is furry and green. He has a quirky face which is also green like his whole body, but not furry. His face has the same characteristics as a french bull dog's face, but without the muzzle. He has a small nose, small eyes and a wide mouth, and plenty of wrinkles .
April 30, 2016
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