Appreciate if someone could suggest a better sentence to convey the idea. Hi friends, I am not happy about the word order of the following sentence of mine. Appreciate if someone could suggest a bett

Niwantha

Appreciate if someone could suggest a better sentence to convey the idea. Hi friends, I am not happy about the word order of the following sentence of mine. Appreciate if someone could suggest a better sentence or word order to convey the same idea. " As requested, I am sending this message to remind you to go through the notes of yours prior to our tomorrow's class." Thanks in advance. Niwantha

Apr 26, 2017 9:27 AM

Answers · 5

I would say the following: "As requested, I am sending this message to remind you to go through your notes prior to our class tomorrow." Note: "your notes" and "our class" are accurate and simpler ways to say what you want to say. If you were to go with the answer above, I would change it to "I am conveying a message from (person) to please go through the notes before the class tomorrow." (No need for 'on tomorrow')

April 26, 2017