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Beyond any doubt unequal wealth distribution and the consequent problems have kept scholars contemplating over the course of modern history. I think it is the responsibility of a government to address the issue, while the poor should also make efforts in this regard, and the rich can contribute to the wellbeing of their fellow men through a fair taxing system as well as voluntary charity activities.
Firstly, when tax revenues are collected and spent fairly and rationally life quality will inevitably improve for everyone. It is only justifiable that the higher income groups should be taxed on the wealth they have accumulated since they have earned it using the resources of their society, either directly or indirectly, which are the shared property of all members of that respective society. Also, in order to maintain the conditions in which one can turn a profit, those earning high amounts rely on a competent and effective workforce, therefore helping the less fortunate ones eventually