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Could you tell me whether these sentences are correct or not? Good  morning!Everyone,today I want to share with you some of my views on AI pets.We all know that modern technology is developing faster and faster, artificial intelligence pets are not so rare, but I still can't imagine if I have one, my life will become like, will I accept it? I am so lucky because my best friend give me an AI pet as my birthday present. I am very surprised, I think it may be very interesting. She knows that I like cats very much,so This pet Is similar to a cat.She told me that I only need to charge it when it is low battery.It can become a lively kitten.I really don't know how to make it look like a cat.Because now in front of me is a slick robot like a cat.Maybe I don't know enough about it, so I can't get this conclusion too early.But there is still a sense of loss in my heart. After all, the really cat’s hair feels very good. After ten days of getting along, I feel that it is really not what I imagined, and some are too mechanical.Just as I went back to the bedroom every day after class, he would only come over to meet me and look up at me howling.But the real cats are very cold, they only do this when they are hungry.Also,When I was doing my homework, he would only stay quietly beside me. But the real cat won't, it may stick to you, will run over and lick your legs to let you touch him, or jump to your desk to sleep.You can bathe him and help him shovel.He will scratch you when he is not happy.But this cat won't, it is sometimes too warm and sometimes too safe.So, for me, it makes me feel less fun with cats. So finally I replace it to my friend and tell her my feeling about these days. I am repulsive to it because I like cats very much. I think cats have a cat world, so I think a robot set by people can't replace a real cat. I know that my knowledge is narrow, because technology is improving.
Nov 5, 2019 6:13 AM
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Thank you!But I do not know how to pop it
November 6, 2019
Pop that into the notebook section of Italki, so we can correct it. It is too long for the Answers section.
November 5, 2019
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