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Don’t write ran quickly I read a few such sentences: “Don’t write ran quickly,” goes the classic advice. “Write sprinted instead.” It’s true that sprinted is more precise and interesting than ran quickly. The two feel hard to me: Dont' write ran quickly. Write sprinted instead. Why are the past tense forms “ran" and "sprinted" used instead of the present participles?
Nov 29, 2019 2:06 AM
Answers · 5
People usually tell stories about past events — in the past tense. By the way, “sprinted” does not mean simply “ran quickly”, it has a more precise meaning. As long as we’re telling an interesting story, there’s nothing wrong with using simpler language, especially if we’re not sure of the exact meaning of “sprinted”.
November 29, 2019
When we're telling a story, it means it has already happened. Hence, the past tense. Also, "ran quickly" and "sprinted" are not the same words. When you're telling a story the words you choose makes an impact. It is good to choose words according to the scene you want the reader to imagine.
November 29, 2019
1. You may write "ran quickly" --it makes total sense. The verb "sprint" does mean run quickly, but only for a short distance, but many times you do hear them used interchangeably. If you were writing a story and you used ran quickly in one sentence and sprinted in another then that would make the story more interesting because you're using different verbs that are basically synonyms. 2. When you tell a story, it's usually about the past. Use past tense. For example past tense: "Yesterday after school, I ran quickly to my mom's house." (Sprinted would work in place of ran quickly, but I personally wouldn't use it.) For example present participle: "I am running quickly to my mom's house." This means at this EXACT moment or in the next few moments you are or will be running. For example past participle "I was running to my mom's house when I saw the dog." "I was running to my mom's house." IS WRONG. You need some more details after the past participle. I am a native English speaker from the USA.
November 29, 2019
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