Hi, Judy. Beutifully written introduction. I added a few spaces after full stops (periods) in your introduction and a capital letter for "China", just as you did with "Japasese" See below. Welcome, This area is usually meant for questions. There is another area for discussion and notebook entries. In those areasn it is easiere for people to comment and show changes to what you write. Hope they work for you. :) Advice? Keep it up doing well. Hi! My name is Judy. I'm from China and I live in suzhou city. My job is to help my parents with their business. My hobby is Japanese anime usually. I like eating meat very much. Right now I am begining to learn English and try to improve my English and I would appreciate your advice. Space after full stop. Space after comma, not before. American English seems to put a comma before "and", but not British English. You can use either here, but will get answerts from both sorts of speakers. Also, it seems a night owl. (night cat) :)