What's wrong with the following sentences?
" you noble sergeant ! The cloud of terror and darkness overshadow us. Dispersed them. Keep the eyes of mishaps close on us. "
These sound like commands, so they need exclamation marks.
" You! Noble sergeant ! The clouds of terror and darkness overshadow us. Disperse them. Keep the eyes of calamities away from us. "
June 16, 2010
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