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People in aboriginal areas in Taiwan in 1264 spoke their own native languages, so they could record their life in their language. Unfortunately, it will be difficult for us to understand what they have done in the past.
Mary might take part in my party, and she would bring a gift to me. She is my best friend and we like to go shopping.
People in aboriginal areas in Taiwan in1264 spoke their own native languages, but now the native languages are in jeopardy. It is important to preserve them or our descendant couldn’t see them.
The world is the treasure-house. People always travel around the world, so they can contact different cultures.

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Please help me check 1
People in aboriginal areas in Taiwan in 1264 spoke their own native languages, so they could record their life in their language. Unfortunately, it will be difficult for us to understand what they have done in the past.
Mary might take part in my party, and she would bring a gift to me. She is my best friend and we like to go shopping.
People in aboriginal areas in Taiwan in1264 spoke their own native languages, but now the native languages are in jeopardy. It is important to preserve them or our descendant couldn’t see them.
The world is the treasure-house. People always travel around the world, so they can contact different cultures.

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In 1264, aboriginal people in areas of Taiwan spoke their own native languages, so they could record their life using their language. Unfortunately, it will be difficult for us to understand what they did.
Mary might come to my party, and she would bring a gift for me. She is my best friend and we like to go shopping.
In1264, people in aboriginal areas of Taiwan spoke their own native languages, but now those native languages are in jeopardy. It is important to preserve them or our descendants  won't understand them.
The World is a treasure-house. People always travel around the World, so they can come into contact with different cultures.