violet
I am Japanese high school student and I am going to go to college next year.These days, I am starting hate me because I am not confident for my study.Though I have to study harder,my iPhone is working a lot of times in days.Especially,I like to watch YouTube.It occupies large part of my times.I need to change my mind and attitude for study and life. I want to go to college in Kyoto and be a registered architect in the future.So I should study more and more to come true it.I try keeping herd!
Sep 18, 2021 4:42 PM
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I am Japanese high school student and I am going to go to college next year.These days, I am starting hate me because I am not confident for my study.Though I have to study harder,my iPhone is working a lot of times in days.Especially,I like to watch YouTube.It occupies large part of my times.I need to change my mind and attitude for study and life. I want to go to college in Kyoto and be a registered architect in the future.So I should study more and more to come true it.I try keeping herd!
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Sep 19, 2021 7:13 AM
I am Japanese high school student and I am going to college next year. These days, I am starting to hate myself because I am not confident in my studies. Although I have to study harder, my iPhone is over working these days because I like to watch YouTube, and it takes a lot of my time. I need to change my mind and attitude towards my studies and life. I want to go to college in Kyoto and be a registered architect in the future. So I should study more fir my dream to come true.
Hey Violet, here are some corrections and I hope you find them helpful. Don't be hard on yourself . Believe in yourself and work hard, your dreams will come true.
Sep 18, 2021 4:51 PM
I am Japanese high school student and I am going to go to college next year.These days, I am starting hate me because I am not confident for my study.Though I have to study harder,my iPhone is working a lot of times in days.Especially,I like to watch YouTube.It occupies large part of my times.I need to change my mind and attitude for study and life. I want to go to college in Kyoto and be a registered architect in the future.So I should study more and more to come true it.I try keeping herd!
Violetsan I think you need to plan your studies. So study ABC from this time to that time. Also plan the break times so you can relax. Gambatte-ne!!
Sep 18, 2021 4:48 PM
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violet
Language Skills
English, Japanese
Learning Language
English