priyanka bisht
Value education and maintaining the emotional balance is not taught in many schools and that is the need of the hour. Today children find it very difficult to face challenges in their life.
Sep 23, 2021 4:10 PM
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Valuing education and maintaining emotional balance is not taught in many schools, and is needed very much in these times. Today children find it very difficult to face challenges in their lives.
I agree. When it comes to writing make sure you are consistent. Children is plural so when speaking about them use plural forms. That is why I changed live to lives. You’re taking about more than one life, therefore you would use the plural form of lives. I hope this helps. Cheers!
Sep 23, 2021 5:05 PM
Values ​​education and the maintenance of emotional balance are not taught in many schools, and that is the order of the day. Nowadays it is very difficult for children to face the challenges of their lives.
Sep 23, 2021 4:31 PM
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priyanka bisht
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