The Tim じぁん!!!
It’s sunny today. I woke up early as usual, then I have watched TV until lunch. After lunch, my dad helped my mom to dye her hair when I was napping. They always get each other’s hair cut instead of going to a barber. Generally he also gets my hair cut too. It’s so lovely of them doing this. Today’s word is “barber”. It’s such a waste of talent of my dad to not being a barber.
Sep 19, 2021 7:22 AM
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It’s sunny today. I woke up early as usual, then I watched TV until lunch. After lunch, my dad helped my mom to dye her hair when I was napping. They always cut each other’s hair, instead of going to a barber. Generally, he also cuts my hair too. It’s so lovely of them doing this. Today’s word is “barber”. It’s such a waste of talent, my dad not being a barber.
Normally you say 'I get my hair cut', because someone is doing it for you. However, in this case your mum and dad are actively cutying hair. A barber is normally used for a place where men get their hair cut. For women you can use hairdressers or hair salon.
Sep 19, 2021 10:19 AM
It’s sunny today. I woke up early as usual, then I watched TV until lunch. After lunch, my dad helped my mom to dye her hair while I was napping. They always get each other’s hair cut instead of going to a barber. Generally, he cuts my hair too. It’s so lovely of them doing this. Today’s word is “barber”. It’s such a waste of talent for my dad to not being a barber.
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Sep 19, 2021 7:50 AM
It’s sunny today. I woke up early as usual, then I watched TV until lunch. After lunch, my dad helped my mom to dye her hair while I was napping. They always get each other’s hair cut instead of going to a barber. Generally he also cuts my hair too. It’s so lovely of them to do this. Today’s word is “barber”. It’s such a waste of talent for my dad to not be a barber.
Hey Tim It’s more natural to say “while” over “when” since the events happened during the nap! Other than that just a few errors of using “-ing” ending when it’s not needed!
Sep 19, 2021 7:40 AM
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The Tim じぁん!!!
Language Skills
Chinese (Mandarin), English, Japanese
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English