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could someone revise this sentence for me, many thanks~~
a contract(trade) volume of 3 billion for international geographical indication products is achieved at the symposium.
Oct 30, 2014 8:32 AM
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It's always hard to translate a complex sentence well in isolation i.e. without context.
You need a unit after "3 billion" e.g. "units", "products" or is it money?
If you are referring to a symposium in the past, you need to say "was achieved".
"Contract volume" or "trade volume" are not standard collocations in ordinary English, in my experience, though I understand what you mean. However, they may be used in the relevant industry. Again, with some context, I might be able to come up with a more natural-sounding alternative.
October 30, 2014
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