1. a) She walks like if she were in a catwalk. '''(were) is wrong in this context''
b ) She always walks like in a catwalk. Good, I would use ''on'' instead of ''in.''
2. a) He is a henpecked man. Good.
3. Anderson is trying to woo to Micaela. Good. though I think it's not necessary using ''to'' before Micaela.
4. Boys always are saying all kind of catcalls to girls on the street. Good XD
5. Those men are wooing to those girls. Good. Same as 3 ''to'' just skip it.