This week was Silver Week in Japan. I worked for seven days at my part-time job. It was very hard, but I finished all seven days without abreak. After that, I had a lot of time to rest. On Saturday, I went to the Tone River in Ibaraki Prefecture to see fireworks. This was the fourth fireworks event I went to this year. The fireworks were very beautiful. I enjoy watching them every year. On Sunday, I met my friend who came from Nagoya. I had not seen my friend for one month, so I was very happy to see my friend again. On September 22 and 23, I stayed at my friend’s house in Saitama. We made some sweets together and ate them. It was very fun. I had a great Silver Week.
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This week was Silver Week in Japan. I worked for seven days at my part-time job.
It was very hard, but I finished all seven days without a break. After that, I
had a lot of time to rest. On Saturday, I went to the Tone River in Ibaraki
Prefecture to see fireworks. This was the fourth fireworks event I went to this
year. The fireworks were very beautiful. I enjoy watching them every year. On
Sunday, I met my friend who came/comes from Nagoya. I had not seen my friend (him/her) for one
month, so I was very happy to see my friend again. On September 22 and 23, I
stayed at my friend’s house in Saitama. We made some sweets together and ate
them. It was lots of fun. I had a great Silver Week.
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