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Talk about a place you dream to visit.
Hmm, I feel like DREAM to visit is a strong word to describe my attempts to visit some places. I can't say I DREAM to visit any place at least not yet but maybe heaven?!.
Anyway, In this essay, I will write about some places I would like to visit or experiences to try before I dieš
First of all, As a Muslim, I would love to visit the holy mosque "Alaqsa" once and pray there, walking in its area and catch up with some Palestinians, may Allah be with our brothers in Palestineš
Another place, I would like to visit is the middle of the ocean. Literally, I would fancy to live in the sea for a couple of weeks, just sailing around for while and discovering this beautiful universe. I feel like the sea is a different world in its zone and believe it's worth to explore, at least for once. By the way, its will be interesting to pass by some sights while sailing like at Antarctica and get a look at that Aurora in the sky. What a sight for sore eyes it will be. Also while sailing...
Jun 22, 2021 4:24 PM
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Talk about a place you dream to visit. Hmm, I feel like DREAM to visit is a
strong word to describe my attempts to visit some places. I can't say I DREAM to
visit any place at least not yet but maybe heaven?!. Anyway, In this essay, I
will write about some places I would like to visit or experiences "I want" to try before
I dieš
First of all, As a Muslim, I would love to visit the holy mosque
"Alaqsa" once and pray there, walking in its area and catch up with some
Palestinians, may Allah be with our brothers in Palestineš Another place, I
would like to visit is the middle of the ocean. Literally, I would fancy to live
in the sea for a couple of weeks, just sailing around for *a* while and discovering
this beautiful universe. I feel like the sea is a different world in itself*
and believe it's worth to be explored*, at least for once. By the way, it* will be
interesting to pass by some sights while sailing *at places* like Antarctica and get a
look at that Aurora in the sky. What a sight for "sore" (?) eyes it will be. Also
while sailing...
- The word "sore" has a meaning like "itchy, bruised, etc." Is that the meaning you wanted to give? If it is not, you can use other words such as "my eyes, some eyes, etc."
- Other than my corrections, I think your essay is very good and I enjoyed reading it :)
Best of luck in your studies!
June 22, 2021
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Talk about a place you dream to visit.
Hmm, I feel like DREAM to visit is a strong word to describe my attempts to visit some places. I can't say I DREAM to visit any place at least not yet but maybe heaven?!.
Anyway, In this essay, I will write about some places I would like to visit or experiences to try before I dieš
First of all, as a Muslim, I would love to visit the holy mosque "Alaqsa" once and pray there, to walk in its area and catch up with some Palestinians. May Allah be with our brothers in Palestine.š
Another place I would like to visit is the middle of the ocean. Literally, I would fancy to live in the sea for a couple of weeks, just sailing around for while and discovering this beautiful universe. I feel like the sea is a different world in its zone and believe it's worth exploring at least once. By the way, it will be interesting to pass by some sights while sailing by Antarctica and get a look at the Aurora in the sky. What a sight for sore eyes it will be. Also while sailing...
June 22, 2021
Invitee
1
Talk about a place you dream to visit. Hmm, I feel like DREAM is a strong word to describe my desire to visit some places. I can't say I DREAM to
visit any place at least not yet but, maybe heaven?!Anyway, In this essay, I
will write about some places I would like to visit or experience before
I dieš
First of all, As a Muslim, I would love to visit the holy mosque Al-Aqsa once and pray there, walk around the city and catch up with some
Palestinians, may Allah be with our brothers in Palestineš Another place I
would like to visit is the middle of the ocean. Literally, I would fancy/love living
in the sea for a couple of weeks, just sail around for a while and discover
this beautiful part of the universe. I feel like the sea is a different world in itself
and believe that it's worth exploring, at least for once. Also, it will be
interesting to pass by some sights while sailing like, the Antarctica and get a
look at that Aurora in the sky. What a sight for sore eyes will it be.
I so agree with you that the sea or the ocean is a universe on its own and scientists say that they didnāt even discover 50% of the sea!
June 22, 2021
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Abdullah B
Language Skills
Arabic, Arabic (Gulf), Arabic (Modern Standard), English, Malay
Learning Language
Arabic (Modern Standard), English
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