Practice Day 2/365 As a software engineer, developing solid solutions was my job. I always felt exhausted after duty. Recently, I had found a good way to relieve my stress, and that was playing the p

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Yi Hsuan

Practice Day 2/365 As a software engineer, developing solid solutions was my job. I always felt exhausted after duty. Recently, I had found a good way to relieve my stress, and that was playing the piano. I bought piano sheets, an arrangement for Canon, online. Having six-year piano playing experience allowed me do sight reading easily. Feeling so soothing through smooth phrases, I gradually got rid of the tiredness. “Where words fail, music speaks.” Hans Christian Andersen said. I couldn't agree more on the quote. Therefore, I immersed myself in the music whenever feeling overwhelmed. (I want to bring my writing skills to next level. Please feel free to edit or make any changes you deem necessary. Thanks! 🙏 )

Sep 6, 2021 1:00 PM

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Practice Day 2/365 As a software engineer, developing solid solutions was my job. I always felt exhausted after performing my duty. Recently, I found a good way to relieve my stress, and that was by playing the piano. I bought piano sheets, an arrangement for Canon, online. Having six-years of piano playing experience allowed me do sight reading easily. It feels so soothing through smooth phrases, I gradually got rid of the tiredness. “Where words fail, music speaks.” Hans Christian Andersen said. I couldn't agree more on the quote. Therefore, I immersed myself in the music whenever I felt overwhelmed. (I want to bring my writing skills to next level. Please feel free to edit or make any changes you deem necessary. Thanks! 🙏 )

Music really does speak volumes! I also recently found a love for music myself. I’m unable to play any instrument though I use virtual software to create music of my own. There’s so many different sounds to experiment with and you can layer them in numerous ways and they’re all so different and exciting 😁 Note for the last sentence: Since you used the past tense verb “immersed,” we would need to make sure the next part matches that past tense form. That’s why we’d say “felt overwhelmed.” Alternatively you Can also say “Therefore, I would immerse myself in music whenever I would feel overwhelmed.” Hope this helps :)

September 6, 2021

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Practice Day 2/365 As a software engineer, developing solid solutions was myjob. I always felt exhausted after work. Recently, I had found a good way to relieve my stress, and that was playing the piano. I bought piano sheets, for Canon, online. Having six-year piano playing experience allowed me do sight reading easily. Playing the piano felt so soothing that it gradually got rid of my tiredness. “Where words fail, music speaks.” Hans Christian Andersen said. I couldn't agree more on the quote. Therefore, i immersed myself in music whenever feeling overwhelmed. (I want to bring my writing skills to next level. Please feel free to edit or make any changes you this lesson for you or your child? necessary. Thanks! 🙏 )

Perfectly done! One thing is one you change your idea start a new paragraph. Other than that splendid work.

September 6, 2021

As a software engineer, developing solid solutions was my job. I always felt exhausted after duty. Recently, I had found a good way to relieve my stress and that was playing the piano. I bought piano sheets, an arrangement for Canon, online. Having six-year piano playing experience allowed me to do sight-reading easily. Feeling so soothing through smooth phrases, I gradually got rid of the tiredness. “Where words fail, music speaks.” Hans Christian Andersen said. I couldn't agree more with the quote. Therefore, I immersed myself in the music whenever feeling overwhelmed.

September 6, 2021

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