Could you help me correct the sentences? Recently l’ve had a discussion with my parents about whether I should be allowed to join the school soccer team. My parents don't allow me to join the school soccer team. First of all, they think I will have no time to study if I join the team, but I believe I can manage my time well. What’s more, they think I’m not strong enough to play soccer, but I can improve myself by trainining every day. In addtion, my parents believe I will get injured easier when I play soccer. However, I’m so careful that it is hard for me to hurt myself. I know my parents care about me and they often tell me how important it is to work hard and enter university, but I want to be a professional soccer player when I grow up. It’s the only thing I have ever wanted to do. Only in this way will I have a chance to achieve my dream.
Nov 18, 2021 8:07 AM