My country is Japan. My recommended place in Japan is Kodaiji Temple in Kyoto. It is lit up during the season of autumn leaves and cherry blossoms. There is a pond at Kodaiji Temple. The cherry bl

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My country is Japan. My recommended place in Japan is Kodaiji Temple in Kyoto. It is lit up during the season of autumn leaves and cherry blossoms. There is a pond at Kodaiji Temple. The cherry blossoms and autumn leaves illuminated by the light are reflected like a mirror there. It's so beautiful that you can't think it's from this world. 👆Please correct it😊 私の国は日本です。私の日本でのお勧めの場所は京都の高台寺です。紅葉🍁や桜🌸の季節にはライトアップされます。高台寺には池があります。そこにライトで照らされた桜や紅葉が鏡のように映ります。この世のものとは思えないくらいの美しさです。✨

Dec 29, 2021 1:27 PM

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My country is Japan. My recommended place in Japan is Kodaiji Temple in Kyoto. It is lit up during the seasons of autumn leaves and cherry blossoms. There is a pond at Kodaiji Temple. The cherry blossoms and autumn leaves illuminated by the light are reflected in the pond like it is a mirror. It's so beautiful that it is hard to believe it's from this world. 👆Please correct it😊 私の国は日本です。私の日本でのお勧めの場所は京都の高台寺です。紅葉🍁や桜🌸の季節にはライトアップされます。高台寺には池があります。そこにライトで照らされた桜や紅葉が鏡のように映ります。この世のものとは思えないくらいの美しさです。✨

So lovely! There are more structural changes you could make to sound more natural in English, but you express yourself very clearly and poetically. I hope I can see the Kodaiji Temple pond one day!

December 29, 2021

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