Written Exercise 183 – A GREEDY CAT [ I want to practise describing a video I
have watched with proper tenses. ] Today, I was swiping my smartphone in a couch like usual, and there was an episode that inadvertently caught my eyes. I guess these days smartphones are smart enough to suit my fancies, because this episode just bursted into my screen as if it had been randomly recommended to me and I liked it indeed. However, It was filmed in Wuxi, Jiangsu
province, China, on March 13th. (你写中文也这么写吗？时间地点这么详细？）A lady in her bedroom holding a piece of snacks
wanted to tease a cat standing in front of the window. Guess what would happen?
Unexpectedly, the cat pushed out the window and walked towards the lady, who
giggling said, “This was the first time the cat opened her window. Nothing can
block a greedy cat's way of getting food. "(我建议视频内容部分用一般现在时、只在开头与结尾用过去式解释由来）and just try to be more casual on telling things could be better, I think.