Written Exercise 183 – A GREEDY CAT [ I want to practise describing a video I have watched with proper tenses. ] Today, I was watching videos on a website on my phone and suddenly, one was randomly recommended to me. It was filmed in Wuxi, Jiangsu province, China, on March 13th. Its about a lady in her bedroom holding up a potato chip to tease a cat standing in front of her window. Guess what happen? Unexpectedly, the cat pushed the window open and walked towards the lady, who giggling said, “This was the first time the cat opened her window. Nothing can block a greedy cat's way of getting food. "

Written Exercise 183 – A GREEDY CAT [ I want to practise describing a video I have watched with proper tenses. ] Today, I was watching videos on my phone and one was randomly recommended to me. It was filmed in Wuxi, Jiangsu province, China, on March 13th. IT SHOWED A lady in her bedroom holding a snack and teasing a cat standing just outside the window. Guess what happened? Surprisingly, the cat pushed open the window and walked towards the lady, who gigglingly said, “This was the first time the cat has opened my / the window. Nothing can block a greedy cat from getting food. "

Written Exercise 183 – A GREEDY CAT [ I want to practise describing a video I have watched with proper tenses. ] Today, I was swiping my smartphone in a couch like usual, and there was an episode that inadvertently caught my eyes. I guess these days smartphones are smart enough to suit my fancies, because this episode just bursted into my screen as if it had been randomly recommended to me and I liked it indeed. However, It was filmed in Wuxi, Jiangsu province, China, on March 13th. (你写中文也这么写吗？时间地点这么详细？）A lady in her bedroom holding a piece of snacks wanted to tease a cat standing in front of the window. Guess what would happen? Unexpectedly, the cat pushed out the window and walked towards the lady, who giggling said, “This was the first time the cat opened her window. Nothing can block a greedy cat's way of getting food. "(我建议视频内容部分用一般现在时、只在开头与结尾用过去式解释由来）and just try to be more casual on telling things could be better, I think.

Written Exercise 183 – A GREEDY CAT [ I want to practise describing a video I have watched with proper tenses. ] Today, I was watching videos on a website on my phone and one was randomly recommended to me. It was filmed in Wuxi, Jiangsu province, China, on March 13th. A lady in her bedroom, holding a snack, wanted to tease a cat, who was standing outside the window. Guess what happened? Unexpectedly, the cat pushed open the window and walked towards the lady, who, giggling said, “This was the first time the cat opened her window. Nothing can block a greedy cat's way of getting food. "

Written Exercise 183 – A GREEDY CAT [ I want to practise describing a video I have watched with proper tenses. ] Today, I was watching videos on a website on my phone and all the sudden I came across one filmed in Wuxi, Jiangsu province, China, on March 13th. In the video, a lady in her bedroom holding a box of snacks was teasing a cat standing on the other side of the window. Guess what would happen? Unexpectedly, the cat pushed the window open and walked towards the lady. As she was giggling, she said “This was the first time the cat opened the window by itself. Nothing can keep a greedy cat away from getting food".