I‘m learning English because I like to talk to people over the world. It broaden my perspectives. And I purely enjoy the process of learning a language. I feel very satisfied when I could express my

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I‘m learning English because I like to talk to people over the world. It broaden my perspectives. And I purely enjoy the process of learning a language. I feel very satisfied when I could express my thoughts well using new vocabularies.

Feb 14, 2024 10:14 AM

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I‘m learning English because I like to talk to people from all over the world. It broadens my perspectives. Also, I really enjoy the process of learning a language. I feel very satisfied when I can express my thoughts well using new vocabulary.

February 15, 2024

I‘m learning English because I like to talk to people over the world. It broadens my perspectives. I purely enjoy the process of learning a language. I feel very satisfied when I can express my thoughts well using new words vocabulary.

"and" is conjunction of coordination so we usually don't use it to start a sentence. Be careful with the usage of tenses: "I feel I can" (present), "I felt I could" (past). Good piece of writing, keep it up.

February 14, 2024

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