Francesca🎀
I can’t believe I won’t live in Milano downtown anymore, this makes me feel very sad. Milano is my favorite city and at the moment I am living by my uncle in a big villa at the very downtown of the city. Here there are a lot of things to do, a lot of restaurants, bars, shops, art galleries, plus, I got some friends. Instead, my boyfriend lives at 20 minutes from my house in a two-rooms flat in the countryside in the middle of nowhere. Maybe in June, when my uncle will retire, I will start co-living with him because we want to build a future together. This is very beautiful, but to live in Milan was also my dream. Moreover my boyfriend doesn’t like dating in Milan, so during these months I feel like I didn’t enjoy the city enough. We went to Chinatown twice, to Brera ones and we went never to Corso Como. This makes me feel even worse. I am sad and underwhelmed. During the last months here I will go out everyday to enjoy it as much as possibile.
Feb 5, 2023 8:28 AM
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I can’t believe I won’t be living in downtown Milano anymore, this makes me feel very sad. Milano is my favorite city and at the moment I am living with my uncle in a big villa at the very heart of the city. There are a lot of things to do here: a lot of restaurants, bars, shops, art galleries, and I have some friends. However, my boyfriend lives 20 minutes from my house in a two-room flat in the countryside in the middle of nowhere. Perhaps in June when my uncle retires, I will start living with him because we want to build a future together. This is very beautiful, but to live in Milan was also my dream. Moreover my boyfriend doesn’t like going out in Milan, so during these months I didn't feel like I enjoyed the city enough. We went to Chinatown twice and to Brera ones, but we went never to Corso Como. This makes me feel quite sad and underwhelmed. During the last months here I will go out everyday to enjoy my stay as much as possible.
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February 5, 2023
I can’t believe I won’t live in downtown Milano anymore, this makes me feel very sad. Milano is my favorite city and at the moment I am living with my uncle in a big villa in the very center of the city. There are a lot of things to do here, there are a lot of restaurants, bars, shops, art galleries, and I also have a few friends living nearby. However, my boyfriend lives at 20 minutes from my uncle's house in a two-rooms flat in the countryside in the middle of nowhere. When my uncle retire (you don't need to use "will" before "retire" since the future is expressed by "when") in June, I will start living with him because we want to build a future together. This is wonderful, but to live in Milan was also my dream. Moreover, my boyfriend doesn’t like living / life in Milan, so during these months I feel like I didn’t enjoy the city enough. We went to Chinatown twice, to Brera once but we never went to Corso Como which makes me feel even worse. I am sad and underwhelmed. During my last months here I will go out everyday to enjoy it as much as possible.
February 5, 2023
I can’t believe I won’t live in downtown Milano anymore, this makes me feel very sad. Milano is my favorite city and at the moment I am living by/near (or do you mean with?) my uncle in a big villa at the very heart/centre of the city. Here there are a lot of things to do, a lot of restaurants, bars, shops, art galleries, plus, I got some friends. Instead, my boyfriend lives 20 minutes from my house in a two-room flat in the countryside in the middle of nowhere. Maybe in June, when my uncle will retire, I will start living (co-habitating/sharing) with him because we want to build a future together. This is very beautiful, but to live in Milan was also my dream. Moreover my boyfriend doesn’t like dating (date nights) in Milan, so during these months I feel like I didn’t enjoy the city enough. We went to Chinatown twice, to Brera once but we went never to Corso Como. This makes me feel even worse. I am sad and underwhelmed. During my last months here I will go out everyday to enjoy it as much as possibile.
February 5, 2023
I can’t believe I won’t be living in Milano downtown anymore; this makes me feel very sad. Milano is my favourite city and at the moment. I am living by ( 'by' is too ambiguous to suggest and edit here) my uncle in a big villa at the very downtown of the city. There are a lot of things to do here: A lot of restaurants, bars, shops, art galleries; plus, I have some friends. Instead, my boyfriend lives 20 minutes from my house in a two-room flat in the countryside (in the middle of nowhere!). When my uncle retires, in June, maybe we will start co-habiting because we do want to build a future together. This outlook is very attractive, but to live in Milan was always my dream. Moreover, my boyfriend doesn’t like dating in Milan, so during these past months I have felt like I didn’t fully enjoy the city. We went to Chinatown twice, to Brera once; yet we went never to Corso Como. I'm not so happy about this. I am left feeling sadly underwhelmed. During the final months here, I will go out everyday - to feast on (the ambience, the culture and the scenery?) as much as possible.
Just altered the tenses mostly (for a more native British English flow) a couple of spelling corrections and a few polished re-phrasings. I opened up the layout for ease of access to the reader - and tweaked some punctuation in case it matters to you. G
February 5, 2023
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