30th January 2022 Cloudy Today I went for a walk with my sister. We had no specific destination, we only aimed at to walk for our health. We stopped by our favorite pastry shop. My family usually buy

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30th January 2022 Cloudy Today I went for a walk with my sister. We had no specific destination, we only aimed at to walk for our health. We stopped by our favorite pastry shop. My family usually buy a birthday cake at the shop. My sister bought my family four pieces of cake. She often buy me something since she started working. We chose four differnt cakes carefully and found out later that the choice was correct. Then, We found a small cafe among residential area. It looked cute, so I would like to go there soon.

Jan 30, 2022 5:45 PM

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30th January 2022 Cloudy Today I went for a walk with my sister. We had no specific destination as we only aimed at walking for health reasons. We stopped by our favorite pastry shop. My family usually buys birthday cakes from this shop. My sister bought my family four pieces of cake. She often buys me something since she started working. We chose four different cakes carefully and found out later that we had made the right choice. We came across a small cafe among the residential area. It looked cute, I would like to go there soon.

January 31, 2022

30th January 2022 Cloudy Today I went for a walk with my sister. We had no specific destination, we only aimed at walking for our health. We stopped by our favorite pastry shop where my family usually buys birthday cakes. Here my sister bought four pieces of cake for my family. She has often bought things for me since she started working. Today we chose four different cakes carefully and found out later that our choices were correct. Afterwards, we found a small cafe in a residential area. It looked cute, and I think I would like to go there soon.

Writing a diary like this is your learning language is a great way to practice, keep it up. You write in lots of short sentences, this is a good way to learn but try to join these small sentences together where the details are connected. That will make things flow better for the reader.

January 30, 2022

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